Chapter 9: Midnight Betrayal
The temple rose before him like a memory made of light. Golden domes caught brightness that came from nowhere, and bells hung quiet in tall towers. Between stone pillars, people in white robes moved slowly, their faces hidden behind glowing mist.He stood at the entrance, bare feet on stones that felt warm and alive. Inside, someone was singing. The voice made no words, just pure sound that reached into his chest and pulled at something deep. The song spoke of emptiness, of chairs left empty, of something precious that had gone away.A person knelt at the altar, shoulders shaking. When they turned, Vencian saw only darkness where a face should be, and tears that fell up instead of down like drops of silver. The singing stopped. In the quiet, a whisper called a name, the sound breaking apart until only "...ian" remained before the temple cracked apart like broken glass, leaving just stone and candle smoke.
A bell rang once, far away. Then everything went silent.
"...ucian."
"Lucian."
The voice was barely audible, a brush against his ear. He didn’t open his eyes right away. Something in him knew it was still night.
"Lucian, wake up."
He blinked into the dimness of the guest cell, heart already rising.
Quenya hovered near the shuttered window, pale as frostlight. She wasn’t speaking loudly, but her eyes were wide. Alert.
"Who is Lucian?" he whispered.
"Well, I couldn’t figure out which name to use. So I combined Luke and Vencian. Lucian. Better, right?"
He exhaled through his nose, then nodded once. "Do what you like."
The silence stretched, until a thought surfaced sharply.
"What is it?" he asked, turning to her. "Why did you wake me up?"
"Something’s wrong," she murmured. "I’ve been flying around... watching. There are men awake. Talking in corners. Carrying weapons under their robes. They’re not monks."
He sat up slowly. The blanket slipped from his shoulders. The candle on the table had burned low, its wax puddled like spilled bones.
Then his gaze landed on the untouched food from last night. He’d forgot to eat it and had fell asleep talking with Quenya. The bread had fallen apart slightly. Something small — a beetle or mouse — was curled up beside the plate, stiff and lifeless. Its body lay half in a crust of bread.
His blood ran cold. A wave of nausea swept through him that had nothing to do with poison, just the bitter taste of understanding. His hands trembled as he stared at the small corpse, and for a moment he couldn’t breathe.
"The food," he said under his breath.
"Yes," Quenya murmured. "You didn’t eat. That may have saved you."
Vencian pushed the blanket aside and swung his legs over the edge of the cot.
He stared again at the small dead thing beside the bread. The monastery’s stones were thick. It wasn’t uncommon for a rodent or insect to slip into a guest chamber. But for it to die like this, so neatly beside his untouched meal, it wasn’t coincidence.
The words didn’t hit him all at once. They layered themselves, one atop the other, until they became a shape he recognized: betrayal.
His first instinct was to deny it. To believe he was being paranoid. To imagine that Quenya was wrong, that the sense of wrongness was just fatigue. But deep inside, something had already shifted.
What triggered this action?
The answer came to him quickly. The letter. What if it had been intercepted? After all, he had used the monastery’s communication device. There was a chance it never reached his mother but was intercepted beforehand.
They were going to sedate me. Not kill me. Capture. The betrayal cut deeper than he’d expected. He’d wanted to believe in something pure, something untainted by the politics. Instead, he’d found corruption wearing monk’s robes.
"Vencian," Quenya said softly, now behind him. "We need to go. Now."
He stood, brushing a hand through his hair, thinking fast.
"Larik and Talor—"
"Still asleep. Or unconscious. I don’t know. But there’s movement outside. Two men walked past your door. Not monks. Not even trying to look like them."
"Then we don’t have time."
He crossed to the small cabinet where his belt and boots had been placed. The sword was where he’d left it. Untampered.
He dressed quickly, his movements sharpened by adrenaline.
"Which room is Talor in?"
"Two doors left from yours. Larik is just across the hall."
Vencian stepped to the door, placing his ear against the wood. The silence felt wrong.
"Can you check the corridor?" he asked.
Quenya vanished. A moment later, she returned, her voice low and urgent.
"Two men at the far corner. Waiting. They’re armed, and not in monk robes."
"If they were going to storm in, they’d have done it by now," he muttered. "They want to take me alive, quietly. Which means they’ll move only when I try to leave."
He cracked the door open half an inch. Cold air swept in from the corridor. Candlelight flickered low in a distant alcove, but most of the hallway lay in shadows. He slid out silently, feet soft on the stone, and crossed to Larik’s door.
Larik’s door creaked faintly as Vencian eased it open. Inside, the room was dark except for the dim glow of moonlight through the high window.
"Larik," he said quietly. "Get up."
There was a beat of silence. If Larik had received the same drugged food and had eaten it...
Before his fear could materialize, the man groaned from his cot. "You’d make a terrible ghost, my lord. Far too polite."
Relief washed him but he hid it. The veteran knight’s training showed - he’d woken instantly at the first sound, alert and ready despite the late hour. "Now, Larik."
That cut through the sleep in his voice. Vencian heard a shuffle, then the rasp of leather as Larik reached for his belt.
"What’s going on?"
"We’re in danger. Poisoned food. Armed men. We need to move quietly."
"Poisoned food?" Larik slid out of bed, already alert. "Well. Talor owes me an apology. I told him the monastery’s stew had the consistency of regret."
"Get your boots on. Meet me at Talor’s door. Quietly."
Larik gave a nod, all amusement gone from his eyes now, though his mouth twitched faintly. "Aye, my lord."
Vencian was already moving, slipping across the hall. Talor’s door was locked with a simple wooden latch. He tapped once. Then again.
"Talor," he hissed.
A muffled grunt. Then silence.
"Talor, open up. It’s Vencian."
Another pause, followed by the scrape of the latch. Like Larik, the veteran knight had roused immediately, his military instincts intact even in sleep. Talor’s broad frame filled the doorframe, hair disheveled, and eyes bloodshot.
"What in the pits of—"
"Keep your voice down," Vencian said sharply. "We’re in danger. We need to move."
Talor stared at him, then looked at Larik, who had just arrived and was grinning faintly.
"I’m telling you, Talor," Larik said quietly, "that stew didn’t just offend the tongue. It tried to kill us."
"I knew something was off," Talor muttered, already pulling on his boots. "Used the last of my dried rations instead."
"Same," Larik said cheerfully. "Monastery food’s no match for Larik’s Campfire Cured Sausage™."
"You made that up just now."
"Don’t ruin the brand."
"Shut up."
"Enough," Vencian said, keeping his voice low. "We’re being watched. I don’t know how many men, but at least two outside my door. They’re not monks. Not even pretending to be."
"How do you know they’re not just hired guards?" Talor asked.
"Because they drugged the food," Vencian said. "And I don’t think they’re meant to kill me. Not yet. Just... disappear me. Hold me long enough that no one asks the wrong questions about the abbot."
That made both men freeze for a moment.
"You think this is tied to that Sebastian fellow?" Larik asked.
"I do."
"Hells," Talor muttered. "We should’ve left yesterday."
"We didn’t," Vencian said. "So now we have to get out quietly, fast, and without giving them a clean shot at us."
"You want to sneak through a monastery filled with conspirators and out the gates in the middle of the night," Larik said. "Simple enough."
"Stable route," Talor said. "North path. We saw it during arrival."
"Service gate behind the orchard," Vencian added. "Unwatched, if we’re lucky."
"We’re not." Talor grunted.
"Still worth trying," Larik said with a grin. "Better than waking up in a cell."
Larik’s grin didn’t reach his eyes. He knew, Vencian realized, just how bad this could get.
Talor nodded, tightening his cloak. "Let’s move."
Vencian waited another moment, keeping his hand on his sword handle. The hallway in front of him was filled with moving shadows from torchlight, and the stone floor felt unusually cold under his boots.
They tried to drug me. Silence me.
He clenched his jaw.
Whoever’s behind this... I’ll find them. And I’ll make them pay.
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Chapter 1
- Prologue
Chapter 2
- Brother
Chapter 3
- No Going Back
Chapter 4
- Mother
Chapter 5
- Ghost Stories
Chapter 6
- The Monastery
Chapter 7
- Letters and Shadows
Chapter 8
- Quenya
Chapter 9
- Midnight Betrayal
Chapter 10
- The Cost of Flight
Chapter 11
- What Remains
Chapter 12
- Shedding Skin
Chapter 13
- The Quiet Hunt
Chapter 14
- Frozen Judgment
Chapter 15
- No Way Home
Chapter 16
- Blood Ties
Chapter 17
- Between Masks
Chapter 18
- Held at the Edge
Chapter 19
- Inside the Keep
Chapter 20
- The Cost of Silence
Chapter 21
- Three Became One
Chapter 22
- One Became Three
Chapter 23
- Alone on the Plains
Chapter 24
- At Deaths Edge
Chapter 25
- Before the Verdict
Chapter 26
- Truth Laid Bare
Chapter 27
- The Letter
Chapter 28
- A Day Before the Letter
Chapter 29
- The Hand of Fate
Chapter 30
- Before the Academy
Chapter 31
- The Pacts Price
Chapter 32
- Someone I Dont Quite Know
Chapter 33
- The Scarlet Trail
Chapter 34
- Graves and Gates
Chapter 35
- The Perfect Cover
Chapter 36
- Cousin
Chapter 37
- New Home
Chapter 38
- First Day Back
Chapter 39
- Elas Zarionel
Chapter 40
- Roselys Marendil
Chapter 41
- Sacred Geometry
Chapter 42
- Altercation
Chapter 43
- Amadeus Navorian
Chapter 44
- Her
Chapter 45
- Following Quietly
Chapter 46
- Masks of Courtesy
Chapter 47
- Deluos 1
Chapter 48
- Deluos 2
Chapter 49
- Deluos 3
Chapter 50
- The Brokers Hand
Chapter 51
- The Interdisciplinary Practicum
Chapter 52
- Rumors of the Republic
Chapter 53
- - 53 The First Round
Chapter 54
- - 54 Fortunes Turn
Chapter 55
- - 55 A Gamblers Leash
Chapter 56
- - 56 First Meeting
Chapter 57
- - 57 Terms of Trust
Chapter 58
- - 58 Quesil Migdol
Chapter 59
- - 59 Archeans and Arkspren
Chapter 60
- - 60 Untrusted Allies
Chapter 61
- - 61 The Last Match
Chapter 62
- - 62 The Last Match 2
Chapter 63
- - 63 The Wagers Collapse
Chapter 64
- - 64 Collateral Damage
Chapter 65
- - 65 Persuasion
Chapter 66
- - 66 Persuasion 2
Chapter 67
- - 67 Debts in the Alley
Chapter 68
- - 68 The Slip
Chapter 69
- - 69 Odd Jobs
Chapter 70
- - 70 Upcoming Event
Chapter 71
- - 71 Abnet
Chapter 72
- - 72 No Price
Chapter 73
- - 73 Blood and Questions
Chapter 74
- - 74 Five Dots
Chapter 75
- - 75 Dream Departure
Chapter 76
- - 76 Echoes Before Arrival
Chapter 77
- - 77 Students of Ethnohistory
Chapter 78
- - 78 Neine
Chapter 79
- - 79 Seer
Chapter 80
- - 80 The Cave
Chapter 81
- - 81 The Chalice Teeth
Chapter 82
- - 82 The Serpent
Chapter 83
- - 83 The Chalice Below
Chapter 84
- - 84 The Prophecy The Curse
Chapter 85
- - 85 Gray Fog
Chapter 86
- - 86 The Illusions
Chapter 87
- - 87 To hell with what I deserve
Chapter 88
- - 88 The Way Back
Chapter 89
- - 89 Ashes and Ghosts
Chapter 90
- - 90 Blood and Chalice
Chapter 91
- - 91 Memories of the Dead
Chapter 92
- - 92 Taste of genesis
Chapter 93
- - 93 Wild Beast
Chapter 94
- - 94 Stable
Chapter 95
- - 95 Aftermath
Chapter 96
- - 96 Salvation
Chapter 97
- - 97 Her Grace
Chapter 98
- - 98 Restless Silence
Chapter 99
- - 99 Reader
Chapter 100
- - 100 The Observation
Chapter 101
- - 101 Architecture of Control
Chapter 102
- - 102 Offering Terms
Chapter 103
- - 103 A Test of Tongues
Chapter 104
- - 104 Masks at Noon
Chapter 105
- - 105 Tests
Chapter 106
- - 106 Hateful Man
Chapter 107
- - 107 More Confusions
Chapter 108
- - 108 Information Source
Chapter 109
- - 109 Interrogation- I
Chapter 110
- - 110 Interrogation- II
Chapter 111
- - 111 Voice
Chapter 112
- - 112 New Alliance
Chapter 113
- - 113 Bad Timing
Chapter 114
- - 114 First Session
Chapter 115
- - 115 Almost Caught
Chapter 116
- - 116 Before the Event
Chapter 117
- - 117 The Event
Chapter 118
- - 118 Girl with a blindfold
Chapter 119
- - 119 A Church Figure
Chapter 120
- - 120 Awkwardness
Chapter 121
- - 121 The Ceremony
Chapter 122
- - 122 The Noble Meeting
Chapter 123
- - 123 The Church and Pentarch
Chapter 124
- - 124 Ritus Lineae I
Chapter 125
- - 125 Ritus Lineae II
Chapter 126
- - 126 Ritus Lineae III
Chapter 127
- - 127 Ritus Lineae IV
Chapter 128
- - 128 Reactions
Chapter 129
- - 129 One More Commotion
Chapter 130
- - 130 Wasted Evening
Chapter 131
- - 131 The Dawnseers rambling
Chapter 132
- - 132 Forgotten Pact
Chapter 133
- - 133 Before the Time Runs Out
Chapter 134
- - 134 The Shape of a Whisper
Chapter 135
- - 135 Late Night Conversation
Chapter 136
- - 136 Academic Excursion
Chapter 137
- - 137 Claims of Judgment
Chapter 138
- - 138 Quiet Corridors
Chapter 139
- - 139 Out of Pattern
Chapter 140
- - 140 Hollow Apostolates
Chapter 141
- - 141 Playing Unconscious
Chapter 142
- - 142 No Other Choice
Chapter 143
- - 143 Lets Leave
Chapter 144
- - 144 After the Escape
Chapter 145
- - 145 Defenseless
Chapter 146
- - 146 A Failed Chase
Chapter 147
- - 147 Alone with her
Chapter 148
- - 148 Forest Peoples
Chapter 149
- - 149 Behind the Scenes
Chapter 150
- - 150 Empty Hours
Chapter 151
- - 151 Baine
Chapter 152
- - 152 Different Dream
Chapter 153
- - 153 Prelude to an Uncomfortable Journey
Chapter 154
- - 154 Here we go again
Chapter 155
- - 155 Terms of Movement
Chapter 156
- - 156 Before the Blade
Chapter 157
- - 157 Not the Body
Chapter 158
- - 158 Brawl in the river
Chapter 159
- - 159 The Delay That Changed Nothing
Chapter 160
- - 160 Almost there
Chapter 161
- - 161 It would be disrespectful
Chapter 162
- - 162 Her Final Card
Chapter 163
- - 163 Already Late
Chapter 164
- - 164 Reports
Chapter 165
- - 165 A Thing Meant to Wait
Chapter 166
- - 166 When Waiting Ends