Chapter 3: If This Is Real…
Nash stared at the glowing screen, jaw slightly open, lips dry.He didn’t move. Didn’t blink.
The numbers. The stats. The categories. All of it.
It was like reading a report card for his entire existence, not just his game, but his body, his presence, his... dick.
His eyes tracked the line again.
Length: 10.9 cm (Below average)
Appeal Rating: ★☆☆☆☆
He winced. Physically winced. His shoulders tensed, his mouth curled like the taste of it had hit his tongue.
"Oh my God," he muttered under his breath.
It wasn’t just humiliating. It was accurate. Disturbingly accurate. The late-game burnout, the clumsy footwork, the early finishes in bed... or the almosts in bed, when he "trained", to be more honest. And the way people forgot him in a room even when he spoke? That too.
He rubbed his hands through his hair, staring at the title.
[Shrimp Tier]
"Okay," he whispered. "Okay... this is either the cruelest dream I’ve ever had, or..."
He looked around the room again. Nothing else had changed. The walls were the same. The old fan clicked overhead.
But the interface still hovered in front of him, real and responsive, reacting to his thoughts and gaze.
Where did this even come from?
The last thing he remembered clearly was blacking out after that hellish locker room breakdown. Then... the voice. That cosmic voice. The system. The...
His thoughts were cut off by a new message blinking in the corner of his vision:
[NEW FEATURE UNLOCKED: SPECIAL QUESTS]
Then another blinked under it:
[NEW FEATURE UNLOCKED: DAILY QUESTS]
His brow furrowed. "Wait, quests?"
He instinctively focused on the second one, daily quests, and the system reacted instantly.
[DAILY QUESTS – ACTIVE]
Complete all quests before 00:00 to earn Daily Stat Points. Skipped days result in stagnation.
→ BASKETBALL CATEGORY: Ball Control & Precision
(Reward: +2 PP upon completion)
• 150 wall passes (alternating left/right hand, at game speed)
• 50 dribble cone-weaves (stationary or moving)
• 30 fake-and-pass drills (must simulate real movement)
Optional Bonus (+1 PP): Record and review your performance for self-analysis.
→ SEDUCTION CATEGORY: Social Edge & Arousal Control
(Reward: +2 SP upon completion)
• Initiate 3 flirtatious interactions (eye contact, smile, confident openers)
• Successfully tease or compliment 2 individuals and receive a positive reaction
• Make at least 1 person blush, become flustered, or flirty (genuine reaction required)
Optional Bonus (+1 SP): Physical contact during teasing (touch hand, shoulder, waist)
→ BODY CATEGORY: Strength & Discipline Grind
(Reward: +2 BP upon completion)
• 100 push-ups (can be split into sets)
• 100 squats (bodyweight)
• 3 minutes total plank time (in sets if needed)
• 1 minute cold water face rinse or cold shower exposure
Optional Bonus (+1 BP): Perform all sets with no rest longer than 1 minute between exercises.
[NOTE:] Quests reset every 24 hours. Progress is tracked automatically. Skipping quests will slow evolution speed. No shortcuts.
SCALING RULE:
1x Completion = Base reward (+2 points)
2x Completion (same day) = +4 total points
3x Completion = +5 total points (diminished gain)
4x or more = +5 max total points (hard cap)
Nash leaned in, eyes darting over each line of text like they might vanish if he blinked too fast.
His mouth moved silently as he read. Then re-read. And again.
Three quests. Each tied to something real. Tangible.
His finger hovered in the air as if he could touch the words.
"Basketball... sex... body," he whispered, voice dry.
He sat back slowly, like he didn’t trust the chair to hold the weight of what this meant.
His heart was pounding. Not from fear. From something closer to awe.
This can’t be real.
He rubbed his eyes once. Twice. The glowing interface remained.
He looked at the breakdown again.
+2 PP
+2 SP
+2 BP
His lips parted slightly.
"...Points. Actual points. So... I can just use them to get better? Just for doing drills... Basketball... It was what Breakball was called before. I could really become better like this? Just for working out."
He let out a breath he didn’t know he’d been holding. It shook on the way out.
"This is..." He trailed off. Shook his head. Laughed once under his breath, but it wasn’t humor. It was a mix of disbelief, spiraling into the edge of hope.
He pressed his palms into his thighs, grounding himself.
What the hell... Something is giving me a way out.No more waiting for luck. No more hoping someone sees me. No more crawling...
He swallowed hard.
"If this is real..."
But it was so good that it felt just too good to be true.
"What if it’s not?" he said, louder now. "What if I finally snapped?"
He stood up, pacing a few steps, hands running through his dark hair.
"What if Zayela walks in and sees me talking to glowing bullshit? She’s working double shifts while I’m hallucinating a magic Breakball-sex system in my bedroom."
His hands trembled.
But then he looked back at the quest list. Still floating. Still pulsing softly like a heart monitor.
Flirt with three girls. Run dribble drills. Do pushups.
Earn points. Change your life.
He stared at it.
It was insane.
It was absurd.
And yet... it made sense.
Everything he’d lacked. Everything he needed to grow. Codified and structured, given to him with rules and rewards.
He looked at his hands again.
They still felt strange. Charged. Like they didn’t belong to the same failure that got kicked off his team yesterday.
"...It’s too perfect," he said quietly.
But the system didn’t blink. Didn’t lie. It just waited.
"...I have to try," he muttered. "Just once. One quest."
His jaw set. His eyes narrowed.
"If this is real... If this is real, I need to see it."
Nash stood up from his bed and stepped out of the bedroom.
The rest of the apartment wasn’t any better. Just one tight room that doubled as a kitchen, dining space, and Zayela’s workstation when she wasn’t on shift.
The walls were exposed concrete, patched with thermal tape. A broken fan ticked overhead.
He moved to the counter, two crates stacked under a cracked slab of synthstone, and grabbed a dented tin from the shelf.
Inside was the usual: dry bars, hard rolls, and off-brand nutri-paste in foil packs.
He peeled open a protein bar, took a bite, and chewed without tasting. It was gritty, chemical, borderline inedible.
On the table, two chairs sat unevenly on the crooked floor, one of them propped up with a book.
Their whole home could fit in one locker room shower stall.
He swallowed hard, washed it down with a sip of old water from a jug, and let out a slow breath.
No comfort. No excuses.
Today, he had a system to test.
The slums of the Underground stretched endlessly above his head, metal beams like ribs of a buried god.
No sunlight ever reached this deep. The only sky was concrete and rusted pipes, laced with steam vents and dim industrial lights flickering in a dirty orange haze.
But this wasn’t just some rotted hellhole.
Down here, life moved. Crowds flowed through wide pedestrian belts, neon signs buzzed over food carts and repair booths, kids laughed as they raced to cramped schools wedged between steel pillars, and freight trains roared across suspended rails overhead.
The air smelled like oil, fried protein, and ambition.
It wasn’t beautiful, but it lived.
And in a patch of Sector 9A, wedged between a busted vending depot and an old training dome, Nash found his place for the day: an underground park.
Rusty benches, cracked pavement, a few warped trees barely hanging on under synthetic lights. It was quiet, and more importantly, empty.
The perfect place for the Body Quest.
• 100 pushups
• 100 squats
• 3-minute total plank
+2 BP upon completion
Bonus: +1 BP if all completed with less than 1 min rest between sets
He took off his jacket, cracked his knuckles, and dropped to the ground.
First Set: Pushups.
The first twenty weren’t bad. He was light, decently built.
But by the time he hit thirty, his triceps were screaming. His breath came ragged. Forty-five and his arms trembled under him. Fifty... and he collapsed, face hitting the ground with a grunt.
He spit onto the pavement.
"Fuck..."
He rolled over, breathing hard, shirt sticking to his back.
Ten minutes later, he pushed again. Second set. Slower. Every push like lifting a steel slab off his chest. His lungs clawed for air in the thick, recycled atmosphere. No breeze, no comfort.
Squats were worse.
His legs burned by thirty. By seventy, they buckled. His thighs felt like fire. He leaned against a bench to keep from vomiting.
He couldn’t rest for less than a minute between sets; he needed more. He failed the bonus early. That dream of +1 BP vanished with the acid in his throat.
Still, he kept going. One set. Another. Then planks.
He thought three minutes would be easy.
It wasn’t.
By the second set, his core quivered, back aching. Sweat dripped onto the cracked cement. He clenched his teeth so hard it felt like his jaw would snap.
But after hours, with several breaks, wheezing, shaking, on the edge of puking his guts out... he finished.
He crawled to the edge of the park where a runoff stream, half-filtered river water, trickled through a cement channel.
He dipped both hands in, then splashed the cold water onto his face.
He rose slowly, shoulders slumped, face drenched, breathing like he’d just clawed out of a grave.
His voice rasped.
"This... is fucking stupid."
His chest rose and fell, sweat still running down the lines of his neck. His clothes clung to him like a second skin.
"Every day? I have to do this every goddamn day?"
He sat on the ground with a grunt, legs stretched out in front of him, letting the soreness settle like poison in his joints.
The adrenaline was gone. All that remained was ache, doubt, and grime.
"And what if this is bullshit?" he thought. "No guarantee, no shortcut... Just sweat and pain."
Then... chime.
A soft, clear sound rang in his ears like a bell in a dream.
[DAILY QUEST COMPLETED — BODY CATEGORY]
+2 BP earned
Progress logged
"Discipline is the beginning of transformation."
For a few seconds, Nash didn’t breathe. Didn’t blink. He stared, wide-eyed, sweat still dripping from his jaw onto the concrete.
His vision shifted, just slightly, and the system’s main interface floated back into view.
He blinked once. Slowly.
BP: 2
There it was. No trick. No lag. No delay. Two real, earned points.
He felt his skin go cold.
This wasn’t a hallucination. Not some stress-induced fantasy.
It was real.
He tilted his head back and let out a long, trembling breath, as if everything inside him was being exhaled at once, fear, doubt, all of it.
It works.
The words bounced through his brain like bullets.
It fucking works.
He started laughing. Quiet at first. A rasp from his raw throat. But it grew. Louder. Shakier. Desperate and alive and raw.
Not joy, something deeper. Like a man seeing a door open where there was once just concrete.
He had a way out. A path up.
No more begging. No more licking crumbs off the floor while Roam and his lapdogs laughed from their thrones.
No more pretending strategy made up for being small, quiet, and forgettable.
He would grow. He would dominate.
He would evolve.
And this time?
The world would remember his name.
Fame, power, women, legend.
All of it, his for the taking.
Chapters
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Chapter 1
- Cherry Balm and Cold Steel
Chapter 2
- Reburn Dominance Evolution System
Chapter 3
- If This Is Real
Chapter 4
- Three-on-Three and One-on-One
Chapter 5
- Behind the Back Between the Lines
Chapter 6
- No Ones Pulling Out Tonight
Chapter 7
- Stroke Squat Repeat
Chapter 8
- Three Rounds No Pull-Out
Chapter 9
- Two to Tango One to Tangle
Chapter 10
- R18Early Bird
Chapter 11
- Mouth Service No Refunds
Chapter 12
- Date Mate Roommate
Chapter 13
- Backdoor Access
Chapter 14
- On the Edge
Chapter 15
- Cockblocked by the Algorithm
Chapter 16
- Musty Musky Mine
Chapter 17
- One Touch from Family to Fantasy
Chapter 18
- Balls Out Shirts Off
Chapter 19
- Court Tease
Chapter 20
- Slippery When Pressed
Chapter 21
- No Touch All Tingle
Chapter 22
- Proof of Endurance
Chapter 23
- R18Body Count One Skill Level Legendary
Chapter 24
- R18 90 Seconds Of Insanity
Chapter 25
- R18Left It In
Chapter 26
- Just the Tip of My Wallet
Chapter 27
- Buying Shame in a Size H
Chapter 28
- Welcome to the Deep End
Chapter 29
- Scored from Deep
Chapter 30
- Devils Playground
Chapter 31
- Dual Wielding
Chapter 32
- Safe Words and Unsafe Thoughts
Chapter 33
- Wine Grind Unwind
Chapter 34
- R18 Threes a Tease
Chapter 35
- R18Triple Threat
Chapter 36
- R18Devils Three-Way2
Chapter 37
- R18Devils Three-Way3
Chapter 38
- R18Devils Three-Way4
Chapter 39
- R18Devils Three-Way5
Chapter 40
- Post Nut Profits
Chapter 41
- Steam Soreness and Sentiment
Chapter 42
- His First Stretch
Chapter 43
- Safe for the First Time
Chapter 44
- Her Body Said Please His System Said Wait
Chapter 45
- Equip Slide Penetrate
Chapter 46
- No Pull-Out No Back Down
Chapter 47
- One Hole Too Many Scores
Chapter 48
- The Zone Where Zippers Die
Chapter 49
- Welcome to the Deep End
Chapter 50
- R18Contract in the Flesh
Chapter 51
- R18 Clash of Crowns
Chapter 52
- R18 Clash of Crowns2
Chapter 53
- R18 Clash of Crowns3
Chapter 54
- R18 Clash of Crowns4
Chapter 55
- Game Set Inside Match
Chapter 56
- Penetrating the Market
Chapter 57
- R18The Pen Isnt the Only Thing Writing
Chapter 58
- Overtime Clause
Chapter 59
- Wet Entry Hard Exit
Chapter 60
- Water Under the Thighs
Chapter 61
- Rub-a-Dub-Dub Two in a Tub
Chapter 62
- Hand Job Security
Chapter 63
- My Kingdom Come
Chapter 64
- Jinzos Blue Pill Blues
Chapter 65
- Mother Natures New Breed
Chapter 66
- Rim Jobbed
Chapter 67
- Teased Toyed And Royally Fucked
Chapter 68
- Dethroned by Several Inches
Chapter 69
- R18 King-Sized Court
Chapter 70
- R18Size Matters
Chapter 71
- Between a Rock and a Hard-On
Chapter 72
- Plot Twist Its a Hentai
Chapter 73
- Manga Sutra
Chapter 74
- Tail-End Dominance
Chapter 75
- R18Ass-terpiece
Chapter 76
- R18Rom-Cum
Chapter 77
- R18Blue Balls Before Tip-Off
Chapter 78
- The Edge Before the Break
Chapter 79
- Seat Wars
Chapter 80
- From Thongs to Thunder
Chapter 81
- One Man Too Many
Chapter 82
- One Shot Inside One Shot Outside
Chapter 83
- R18 Halftime Show
Chapter 84
- R18 Halftime Show 2
Chapter 85
- R18 Halftime Show 3
Chapter 86
- R18Halftime Hard-On
Chapter 87
- Blowing the Lead
Chapter 88
- Stroke of a King
Chapter 89
- Missed Shot
Chapter 90
- Everyone Saw Him Coming
Chapter 91
- The Kings Hands Are Never Empty
Chapter 92
- Rotations of Lust
Chapter 93
- R18One Mouth Two Balls Three Moans Four Heats
Chapter 94
- R18One Mouth Two Balls Three Moans Four Heats2
Chapter 95
- R18One Mouth Two Balls Three Moans Four Heats3
Chapter 96
- R18One Mouth Two Balls Three Moans Four Heats4
Chapter 97
- R18One Mouth Two Balls Three Moans Four Heats5
Chapter 98
- R18One Mouth Two Balls Three Moans Four Heats6
Chapter 99
- R18 Avatar of Lust
Chapter 100
- Team Chemistry
Chapter 101
- If We Werent
Chapter 102
- R18 The Forbidden Line
Chapter 103
- R18 The Forbidden Line2
Chapter 104
- R18 The Forbidden Line3
Chapter 105
- R18 The Forbidden Line4
Chapter 106
- R18 The Forbidden Line5
Chapter 107
- R18 The Forbidden Line6
Chapter 108
- R18 The Forbidden Line7
Chapter 109
- R18 The Forbidden Line8
Chapter 110
- R18 The Forbidden Line9
Chapter 111
- Post-Nut Clarity
Chapter 112
- Game Of Tongue
Chapter 113
- The Hard Truth
Chapter 114
- Teamwork Makes the Cream Work
Chapter 115
- Squat and Thrust
Chapter 116
- Virgin Weight Class
Chapter 117
- R18Office Penetrations
Chapter 118
- R18The Cum-ute
Chapter 119
- Cumfort Zone
Chapter 120
- R18Sarras Service Room
Chapter 121
- R18Sarras Service Room2
Chapter 122
- R18Sarras Service Room3
Chapter 123
- R18Sarras Service Room4
Chapter 124
- Mic Check Clit Check
Chapter 125
- R18Five Fingers of Fame
Chapter 126
- R18Encore of Orgasms
Chapter 127
- R18VIP Very Intimate Penetration
Chapter 128
- The Baby-Boom Bait
Chapter 129
- Pussy Paradise or Players Prison
Chapter 130
- Panty Traps and Power Plays
Chapter 131
- Preludes in Pink Noise
Chapter 132
- Spin the Bottle Grind the Throttle
Chapter 133
- Tit-for-Tat Dare Massive Motorboat
Chapter 134
- Breaking the Glass
Chapter 135
- Authority
Chapter 136
- Predator
Chapter 137
- R18Whiskey Dick
Chapter 138
- Iron Will
Chapter 139
- R18An Eye For an Eye A Fuck for a Fuck
Chapter 140
- R18An Eye For an Eye A Fuck for a Fuck2
Chapter 141
- R18An Eye For an Eye A Fuck for a Fuck3
Chapter 142
- R18An Eye For an Eye A Fuck for a Fuck4
Chapter 143
- The Reverse Trap
Chapter 144
- The Court Before the Court
Chapter 145
- The Kiss and the Crown
Chapter 146
- Neon Clash on the Court
Chapter 147
- Declaration of War
Chapter 148
- Early Comer
Chapter 149
- Balls Deep in Baby-Boom
Chapter 150
- Bodies on the Floor
Chapter 151
- The Sub Game
Chapter 152
- The Second Coming
Chapter 153
- Pressure Makes Kings
Chapter 154
- Sweat Discipline
Chapter 155
- Enter Madame de la Bite
Chapter 156
- Court of Queens
Chapter 157
- All Out War
Chapter 158
- Court Chemistry
Chapter 159
- The Touch Game
Chapter 160
- Halftime Execution
Chapter 161
- Tongueplay on the Court
Chapter 162
- Touched Without Being Touched
Chapter 163
- Heat Hope and the King of the Court
Chapter 164
- Too Hot for Overtime
Chapter 165
- R18 The Kings Eight
Chapter 166
- R18 The Kings Eight2
Chapter 167
- R18 The Kings Eight3
Chapter 168
- R18 The Kings Eight4
Chapter 169
- R18 The Kings Eight5
Chapter 170
- R18 The Kings Eight6
Chapter 171
- R18 The Kings Eight7
Chapter 172
- R18 The Kings Eight8
Chapter 173
- R18 The Kings Eight9
Chapter 174
- R18 The Kings Eight10
Chapter 175
- R18Front-Row Seat to My Own Funeral
Chapter 176
- R18Front-Row Seat to My Own Funeral2
Chapter 177
- R18A Cucks POV
Chapter 178
- R18A Cucks POV2
Chapter 179
- R18A Cucks POV 3
Chapter 180
- R18The Cheating Otaku
Chapter 181
- R18The Cheating Otaku2
Chapter 182
- Beast
Chapter 183
- Losers
Chapter 184
- Here We Are
Chapter 185
- Dead Dogs Dont Hunt
Chapter 186
- King Roam and His Court of Clowns
Chapter 187
- Big Stoopid and Mine
Chapter 188
- Left Hungry
Chapter 189
- Just a Bath
Chapter 190
- Most Wanted
Chapter 191
- Captains Benefits
Chapter 192
- A Captains Duty
Chapter 193
- Monsters That Dont Bite
Chapter 194
- A Useful Kind of Trouble
Chapter 195
- Between Stations
Chapter 196
- Wrong Door Right Moment
Chapter 197
- Caught Like A Rat
Chapter 198
- A Tongue Master
Chapter 199
- The Door Opens
Chapter 200
- Too Much for One Couch